Scream: The Remake in 2042!?

Scream: The Remake in 2042!?

The thought of a remake hitting our screens, billed with the title “Scream” sends a chill through me, as I’m sure it does the rest of you. I can see the trailer now: a shot of a modern-day starlet from some Vampire Diaries/Secret Circle/Glee/Gossip Girl/90210-type show answering her phone (a tiny cell phone rather than [...]

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Scream 4 DVD & Blu-Ray Released Today!

Scream 4 DVD & Blu-Ray Released Today!

Today is the day we’ve all been waiting for! While Scream 4 has already shipped for some, today is the official release date and the point in time where the movie joins the previous 3 as home releases. No more waiting, no more crappy bootlegs! To mark this point in Scream history we’d like to [...]

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Scream Deconstructed Release Details Emerge

Scream Deconstructed Release Details Emerge

Information’s been scarce on the upcoming nonfiction Scream text… until now.  Scream Deconstructed: An Unauthorized Analysis has an official site now that lays it all out.  The book is set for an October 25 release and will be available exclusively (at least for the time being) through Amazon.  In fact, it’s already availble for pre-order. The site includes [...]

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Press Release: Scream Book Slashes Marketplace

Press Release: Scream Book Slashes Marketplace

The first book about all four ‘Scream’ films enjoys wider distribution on Kindle, Nook, Barnes & Noble, and international Amazon stores after successful initial release. SCARY MOVIES GET ANALYZED AS ‘SCREAM DECONSTRUCTED’ INVADES E-BOOK AND INTERNATIONAL MARKETPLACE Americans who like their slasher films with a side order of introspection have made the book ‘Scream Deconstructed: [...]

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Scream 4, Or: How I Learned To Stop Worrying And Love The Bomb

Scream 4, Or: How I Learned To Stop Worrying And Love The Bomb

Written by Liver Alone for Scream-Trilogy So I’m casually browsing the web when I hear that Paranormal Activity 3 garnered a smashing $50 million opening weekend at the North American box office, and as a Scream fan, all the bitterness and swallowed pride from six months prior came rummaging back up.  You see, in the [...]

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Scream: The Remake in 2042!?

The thought of a remake hitting our screens, billed with the title “Scream” sends a chill through me, as I’m sure it does the rest of you. I can see the trailer now: a shot of a modern-day starlet from some Vampire Diaries/Secret Circle/Glee/Gossip Girl/90210-type show answering her phone (a tiny cell phone rather than a clunky white cordless house phone) and hearing that familiar question, “what’s your favorite scary movie?” – but not in Roger Jackson’s familiar drawl, instead possibly voiced by the Dad from The OC! Then we see a clip of someone who is now playing Sidney. And then Dewey. Then Gale. A re-vamped version of new-Tatum stuck in the garage door, or perhaps some other modern electronic home appliance; a shot of new-Randy pausing a DVD (not video) of Halloween (Zombie, not Carpenter) and explaining “the rules”. A headline flashing up on somebody’s I-Pad about Cotton Weary’s trial.

I think to us lot, who are fans of the existent, original Scream series, the thought of a remake is sacrilege. Right here, right now, in 2012, when the original Scream was only made about 15 years ago, it absolutely seems too soon to think about remaking it. But a major issue with Scream 4 not being as popular at the box office was that it’s a continuation to a series that stood still for 10 years before resurfacing. We all loved that it happened, of course, but I guess lots of people had forgotten about the series or the “kids” of today didn’t really understand it.

Don’t get me wrong, I am so gunning for Scream 5 to happen, and then Scream 6. As long as they do it properly, they can keep them coming. But thinking outside the box, a remake wouldn’t be THAT horrendous if it appeared way in the future. I’m 27 but when I’m, say, 57, Scream is going to look outdated and there’ll be a whole new generation who will see it as an old film, like we see films from the 70s now. So if they remake it in, say, 30 years time, that new generation probably won’t have seen the original and it will be totally new to them. Someone commented on Scream4Fan’s article about the pointlessness of a remake, as we would know who the killer was going to be and already know how Casey Becker’s scene would materialize etc. But the new set of people watching it won’t have a clue and to them it will probably be amazing (as long as the filmmakers replicated it excellently). If anything, a remake in the future might simply bring the original to the attention of the younger generation in years to come. They would probably then dig it out of the archives and appreciate it for its brilliance.

I saw the recent Friday The 13th remake and consequently made an effort to watch the original series from 30 years ago, and appreciated them more. The same thing could happen with Scream. I personally also think Rob Zombie did a decent job with Halloween – the original Halloween will always be the king, but he made it his own by focusing more on Michael Myers’ childhood and directed it from a different slant, and, as a separate film, I thought it was good. Likewise, I like the Texas Chainsaw Massacre and the Hills Have Eyes remakes. What I’ve enjoyed about these (and Halloween) is that their consequent sequels (The Texas Chainsaw Massacre: The Beginning, H2 and The Hills Have Eyes 2) have then been totally new stories, allowing the same franchise to be modernized and developed with new ideas – it has allowed them to grow.

Look, I know a lot of diehard fans may very well be reeling at some of my comments here, as so many people HATE remakes and I know there’s a lot of hate for the Zombie Halloween series, but I’m trying to look at it objectively from the viewpoint of a future, younger audience. I absolutely, 100% do not want a Scream remake anytime soon. I am pro-Scream 5 all the way. But if in 30 years time one surfaced, I wouldn’t hate it – nor would I be surprised. It could even, in the style of the Halloween, Hills…, Texas… remakes veer off into a series of new, original stories. We may one day, as a result, have an alternate Scream 3, which betters the original Scream 3, which is widely criticized as the weakest of the franchise (much like the two different versions of Stab 3 – art imitating art).

Another of the comments made on Scream4Fan’s article suggested that Scream 4 should have been a kind of remake of Scream but with different characters and a new plot – just the common trend of Ghostface. This is something I would loathe to see happen, personally. One of my pet-hates in a franchise is when a “sequel” has absolutely nothing to do with the original story. I don’t understand the point of it and feel that it is a pathetic excuse to make a film – almost as if the studio couldn’t be bothered to come up with a new creative idea and so instead ride on the coat-tails of another successful series. Prime examples are several of the original Halloween films which did not feature Laurie Strode (and in the case of Halloween 3, not even feature Michael Myers) and I’ll Always Know What You Did Last Summer, which to this day infuriates me. I want desperately for someone out there to greenlight a remake of that movie but with Jennifer, Freddie & Brandy and a fisherman who is not an invincible zombie! I want to know what happened to Julie when she was dragged under that bed, not what happens to some random group of kids in a different town who have nothing to do with the original plotline.

Another suggestion from a reader was to stop calling Scream sequels 4, 5, 6 and so forth and instead try out a Scream: Resurrection type style. I say please Lord no – especially if the title reflects the horrendous quality of film that was Halloween: Resurrection.

The prospect of a remake, way in the future, COULD be an exciting opportunity to develop things that were perhaps, dare I say it, underdeveloped in the original. Like Zombie developed Myers’ childhood, and the Friday The 13th remake brutalized and re-invented the deaths from the original, Scream: The Remake could throw in new characters to be gloriously killed off; we might actually get to see Principal Himbrey strung up on the goalpost; what if Casey gets to her parents in time, but Ghostface horrifyingly kills them in front of her before finishing her off; what if he doesn’t kill them but instead we get to see their reactions beyond the opening sequence; the remake might choose to open the movie instead with Maureen Prescott’s backstory – the new Scream opening might very well be the night she was killed, rather than opening with Casey Becker – perhaps she was killed after a taunting phone call; there might be opportunity here to foreshadow the Roman Bridger/brother development that later came about – we could see Bridger influencing Billy and Stu; could one of the killers perhaps survive and be sent to jail, to return in a new remake version of Scream 2?

I’m sure plenty of you are hating my written butchery of the original Scream. But understand that I am in awe of the original as much as the rest of you. I’m just elaborating on the possibilities that a remake, way in the future, could bring. Let’s hope that if it happens, we can reconvene in 2042 and dissect a new Scream that has done the original justice and not torn it to shreds. Perhaps wishful thinking, but you never know…

Perhaps not.

Press Release: Scream Book Slashes Marketplace

The first book about all four ‘Scream’ films enjoys wider distribution on Kindle, Nook, Barnes & Noble, and international Amazon stores after successful initial release.

SCARY MOVIES GET ANALYZED AS ‘SCREAM DECONSTRUCTED’ INVADES E-BOOK AND INTERNATIONAL MARKETPLACE

Americans who like their slasher films with a side order of introspection have made the book ‘Scream Deconstructed: An Unauthorized Analysis’ by Scott Kessinger an unlikely hit, and now fans abroad can join in: in both print and electronic form. Independent publishing imprint Stinger Books announced this week that ‘Scream Deconstructed’ is now available through a number of new avenues for the first time: the e-book version is available on the Kindle and Nook e-readers, while the paperback form is now carried by Barnes & Noble – the largest book retailer in the U.S. – through its website, and perhaps most importantly, the book is now available on the international sites of online giant Amazon.

The wider distribution includes much of Canada, the United Kingdom, Japan as well as much of mainland Europe: Austria, France, Germany, Italy, and Spain. The pricing varies slightly from territory to territory, but the German Amazon website lists the paperback edition for €7.99 and the e-book for €4.59 EUR, while the American version lists them at $9.99 and $3.99 USD, respectively. Until now, ‘Scream Deconstructed’ was an exclusive to the American Amazon website, and has continually topped the retailer’s Film History & Criticism bestseller list since its initial release in October.

Stinger Books says it had given the book only a modest online ad campaign and attributes the book’s success mostly to word-of-mouth among ‘Scream’ and horror fans. Rodrigo Kurtz, editor of ‘Scream’ fansite Hello Sidney said, “‘Scream Deconstructed’ gave me a completely new perspective about a subject I thought I knew so well.” Kurtz called it, “a mind-blowing lecture that goes very deep into the philosophy encapsulated in the movies. It is a must-have to the fans of the franchise.” John Valeri is a writer for Hartford Books Examiner and recently interviewed ‘Scream Deconstructed’ author Scott Kessinger. Valeri is a self-proclaimed ‘Scream’ fan and said the book is a “penetrating and insightful analysis (that) just may cause you to rethink everything you thought you knew.”

The success of ‘Scream Deconstructed’ is all the more surprising because it was achieved without the backing of the film studio behind the ‘Scream’ movies. As the subtitle “An Unauthorized Analysis” suggests, ‘Scream Deconstructed’ was not licensed by The Weinstein Company, who own the rights to the films, nor filmmakers Wes Craven and Kevin Williamson. In his interview with Valeri, Kessinger said he made sure “to be respectful of the fact that Scream isn’t my property.” Kessinger continued, “It’s not trying to repackage the films’ content and sell it back to you. My review, the analysis, is the content of the book.”

The ‘Scream’ film series started in 1996 and has had four installments: the latest, ‘Scream 4,’ was released earlier this year. The movies quickly became some of the most influential in film history and are considered a genre landmark. Kessinger noted, “Critics all seem to agree that the ‘Scream’ movies had a lot going on under the surface, but there’s nowhere near as much literature about them as you might think. It inspired me to try to fill that void.”

Fans can keep up with the latest developments with the book through its official website, ScreamDeconstructed.com.

Scream 5 Or Scream Remake?

After Scream 4 was in theaters for a month and tanked the money, some people said it would have done better in the Box Office if it was a Remake – since hearing “Scream 4″ after a 10 year gap, people would think it won’t be entertaining especially with the “4″ in the name. Others think it would have done better with advertising.

The Weinsteins are already working on a storyline for Scream 5. So would you prefer seeing a Remake of Scream or seeing a continuation of the new trilogy?

Myself, I prefer Scream 5. Having a Remake of Scream would annoy me and it would disrespect all the fans out there who love this Franchise. It has that element that makes us love Scream.

Scream 5 Officially Mentioned by Dimension Films

As many of us know, Dimension Films makes polls about their movies and rarely do they add Scream 5 as an option for a future installment. Instead, people add it as an option and they keep removing it. But this time, it doesn’t look like this is the case. Today, not only did they include Scream 5 in their poll of “Which Dimension Films sequel are you most looking forward to?” but they also tweeted it as well which looks like its official that it is a go.

Kevin Williamson Writing Scream 5 Right Now?

Many of us know that Kevin tweets daily and that he is starting a new Serial Killer show that starts next year. When Kevin was writing Scream 4 he tweeted about it and if you remember some of his tweets it sounds very similar to what he is tweeting about now (very Scream-ish).

His recent tweets:




Fun speculation of course, but is it possible he is referring to Scream 5?

Scream 4 Not Top 17 In Japan’s Box Office

According to Box Office Mojo, Scream 4 in Japan has not been successful and has tanked there. We were all waiting eagerly to see if Scream 4 would rack up enough money to reach $100 Million Worldwide in Japan but it turned out it hasn’t even made the top 17. Is that bad news? Not necessarily. Is it good news? Not necessarily. It doesn’t really affect us anymore as overseas already did decent in saving the movie and as previously posted, the Weinsteins are already working on a Scream 5 Storyline.

It would be amazing if it did hit $100M Worldwide, but reaching $97M Worldwide is great considering it was a 10 year gap and also there was lack of advertising for the film.

Scream 4, Or: How I Learned To Stop Worrying And Love The Bomb

Written by Liver Alone for Scream-Trilogy

So I’m casually browsing the web when I hear that Paranormal Activity 3 garnered a smashing $50 million opening weekend at the North American box office, and as a Scream fan, all the bitterness and swallowed pride from six months prior came rummaging back up.  You see, in the run up to Scream 4‘s release I had gotten my hopes up that the movie would bring back the series’ box office glory days and be the first unambiguous horror movie to smash the $50 million mark on its opening weekend.

It didn’t happen.  It really didn’t happen.

In fact, Scream 4 became arguably the biggest surprise disappointment in recent box office memory.  What’s worse, it seemed like the movie would always fall just short of any kind of silver lining, as if there were nothing we could point to in which we could say, “well, at least it’s doing that well.”  Maybe it’ll at least get a $20 million weekend, that still sound somewhat impressive, right?  No, the estimate turned out to be $19 million.  Well, at least it’s practically $20 million, right?  The actual number turned out to be $18 million.  Well, maybe it’ll have legs like the first Scream!  Instead, the film wound up closing at $38 million, which is about how much most people predicted for its first weekend.

The three films in the Scream trilogy are still the biggest slasher films ever at the box office.  Scream 4?  #20.

The aftermath is almost as bad.  When films bomb, support gets pulled, and Scream 4 is no different.  Despite a generally favorable critical reception, Scream 4 was passed over in awards it should have been up for (the recent Scream Awards snub being the biggest sting, I mean come on) and generally wound up being quietly dropped from the media consciousness.

Paranormal Activity 3‘s success may have brought back these bitter feelings for a bit, but it helped when I recalled what helped me get over them in the first place.  First off, it’s good to have a bit of perspective: as disappointing as its takings are, Scream 4 was still seen and appreciated by millions of people worldwide.  Even more than that, though, there are possible good things to come out of even this situation:

Scream 4 has the makings of a cult hit.

It’s weird to think of the most mainstream horror series having an entry that could be considered a ‘cult’ favorite, and perhaps it’s not the best descriptor.  But it has the qualities of a film whose reputation in the long run overshadows its tepid box office reception in its infancy: think Blade Runner, The Thing, or The Shawshank Redemption.

The majority of reviews for Scream 4 were positive, and what’s more, the positive reviews were a lot more enthusiastic than the negative ones.  Add in that the negative reviews seemed like they weren’t sure what to make of the movie (the most common complaint was that in the end, the movie hadn’t really shaken things up cast-wise, even though that was kind of the whole point of the movie).

Generally, when a film gets mixed reviews, the most passionate response is the one that sticks.  Believe it or not, Star Wars Episode I was not nearly as poorly received as you might think: it’s just that the portion of the audience that was disappointed was much more passionate in their opinion than those that liked it.  The result? Years later, Episode I is mostly remembered as a near-disaster.

This bodes well for the future of Scream 4, as its advocates are a lot more fervent than its detractors.

The Scream saga is fine as it is.

I never really needed a Scream 4. I was happy that we got one, and a part of me always assumed that there would be one someday in a Halloween: H2O fashion, but it wouldn’t have bothered me if it didn’t happen.  The story of Scream had wrapped up in the prior trilogy, and we got to see our characters enter “happily ever after.”

Had Scream 4 been a smash, the Weinsteins would have immediately greenlit a Scream 5.  But if I didn’t really need a Scream 4, I really don’t need a Scream 5 or 6Scream 4 is a fine reunion movie, an epilogue to the series.  What place is there for a Scream 5?  Where do you go from here?  How do you justify the same events happening over and over again without it getting ridiculous?

It’s telling that a lot of casual moviegoers’ first reaction to the Scream 4 marketing was, “Scream FOUR?”  I think for many people Scream was the “smart” horror movie. It’s the series that knew better than to overstay its welcome: no characters came back as a zombie, Sidney and friends didn’t get launched into space, and–this one a fact celebrated and flaunted by Scream 4 itself–it didn’t get rebooted.  Even Scream 4 was a bit much for many to swallow, let alone a fifth or sixth iteration.

Especially considering Wes Craven’s ideas for the future include possibly killing off the main characters (because dumping on a prior movie’s ending worked well in other series, right?), it seems, now more than ever, we should leave Scream be with its dignity intact.  If it takes Scream 4 bombing in order to achieve that, then so be it.

Scream‘s coronation

My favorite thing about Scream 4‘s release, beyond even the film itself, is that it brought about a collective cultural retrospective of the original trilogy, especially the first film.  Not only did we get two awesome documentaries about the series, the plethora of marketing for Scream 4–the TV interviews, the magazines, the blogs–doubled as a look back at the movie series that redefined horror and shook up the film medium 15 years prior.

The veneration of Scream is something that isn’t marred by Scream 4‘s box office upset.  In fact, Scream 4‘s release helped bring it about even earlier.  I think Scream fans had always known the film would one day be considered a bona fide classic.  That day has come.

“Liver Alone” is the alias of Scott Kessinger, who is the author of the book Scream Deconstructed: An Unauthorized Analysis.

David Arquette Reunites With Ghostface

“Look who I ran into over the weekend!” -via David Arquette on Facebook

Scream Deconstructed Release Details Emerge

Information’s been scarce on the upcoming nonfiction Scream text… until now.  Scream Deconstructed: An Unauthorized Analysis has an official site now that lays it all out.  The book is set for an October 25 release and will be available exclusively (at least for the time being) through Amazon.  In fact, it’s already availble for pre-order.

The site includes a chapter list that gives us an idea for what topics the book goes into:

Part I-  Scream
What the Hell is it?
The Disrupted Deconstruction
Sex and the Final Girl
Billy’s Reel Life and the Battle of the Sexes
A Ghostface in the Machine

Part II- Scream 2
A Stab in the Black
The Walking Question Mark
Derek and Mrs. Loomis: The Sexes Strike Again
Mickey, Cotton, and Sidney’s Media Matters

Part III- Scream 3
Roman’s Hollywood Horror
Dewey and Gale: A Real Life Movie Romance

Part IV- Scream 4
The State of Horror in 2011
The Unexpected: The New Cliché
Kill Jill
Meet the New Media, Same as the Old Media
Surviving in a Post-Scream World
Scream Echoes

As well as the book’s specifications:

Specs
Authored by Scott Kessinger
First Edition
Publication date: 2011
5″ x 8″ (12.7 x 20.32 cm)
Black & White on White paper
160 pages
Stinger Books
ISBN-13: 978-0615545790
ISBN-10: 0615545793
BISAC: Performing Arts / Film & Video / History & Criticism

Kevin Williamson’s Secret Scary Movie Script (Part 1)

Before Windsor College, Stab 3 or Jill Roberts there was Kevin Williamson, an idea and a title— Scary Movie.

The following is an analysis of the screenplay that would come to be known as Scream.  The photocopy used in the creation of this article is dated April 5, 1995. It features Kevin’s handwritten revisions as he changed dialogue, expanded on ideas and even renamed major characters.

Information will be delivered to you under one of three headings:

FROM THE FIRST DRAFT

These sections will be transcripts of what appears in the first draft. Quite often, you’ll find dialogue or description crossed out. This signifies that Kevin himself crossed out that section and replaced it with something else. The new dialogue will appear in the proper context next to the phrase “Kevin’s Note.”

KEVIN’S NOTES

Because not all of Kevin’s notations are in reference to a specific piece of dialogue or descriptive action, you’ll find transcripts of what he jotted down under this heading. It’s my intention to re-create his notations as faithfully as possible so any spelling or capitalization errors are included on purpose.

MY NOTES

Under this heading, you’ll find any extra analysis I can bring to the table. Personal information and critical reaction will be kept to a minimum. This section will mainly consist of analyzing why changes were made, what was changed even further by the time shooting commenced and other random facts.

KEVIN’S NOTES

Like any good writer, Kevin is anything but precious with his first draft. His revisions begin immediately– changing “Girl” to “Casey.” Kevin goes on to describe Casey’s age (“no-more than seventeen”) and calls her “pretty, flirty with innocent eyes.”

MY NOTES

I’ve compared this “Rough Draft” to what was published in “Scream: A Screenplay” from Miramax Books/Hyperion in 1997. In that publication, Casey is described as “no more than sixteen… a friendly face with innocent eyes.”

FROM THE ROUGH DRAFT

It’s amazing that the first moments of this now classic scene were locked from day one. Casey’s initial back and forth with the killer—at this point known simply as “Man”—didn’t change a lick.

GIRL

Hello.

MAN’S VOICE

Hello.

Silence.

GIRL

Yes?

MAN

Who is this?

GIRL

Who are you trying to reach?

Voilà! A film classic is born!

Casey’s call lasts a bit longer than it does in the final film, however.

GIRL

What number are you trying to reach?

MAN

So many questions.

GIRL

Hey, you called me.

MAN

What’s your name?

GIRL

Nunya.

MAN

Nunya?

GIRL

Nunya business.

CLICK! 

KEVIN’S NOTES

“MAYBE CHANGE Convo-  Set up CASEY POPPING POPCORN. WATCHING MOVIE. THEY CHAT. SHOW PASSAGE OF TIME.

FROM THE ROUGH DRAFT

Originally, the second call happened after Casey made her way into the kitchen—which features a sliding glass door in this draft.

The first comedic moment of Scream is completely intact: “They’ve got 900 numbers for that.”

However, unlike in the final film, Casey doesn’t hang up there. That doesn’t happen until AFTER he reveals this isn’t just your standard wrong number.

Horror was changed forever on page 3…

MAN

Do you like scary movies?

The girl stands in front of the glass door. She twirls her hair, getting a kick out of this.

GIRL

You want to go to the movies?

MAN

Maybe.

GIRL

I love scary movies.

MAN

What’s your favorite scary movie?

GIRL

My favorite? Uh..that’s easy. HALLOWEEN. It’s the daddy. That guy with the white mask. Sooo scary. What about you? What’s yours?

MAN

NIGHTMARE ON ELM STREET.

GIRL

The first one was good. The rest sucked.

MAN

So what’s your name?

GIRL

Guess.

MAN

No, tell me.

GIRL

Why?

MAN

Because I want to know who I’m looking at.

KEVIN’S NOTES

Next to the above exchange is written “Rework.”

FROM THE ROUGH DRAFT

The following exchange appears with a large “X” through it.

GIRL

Phone calls like this are against the law. You could get in a lot of trouble.

MAN

We’re just talking.

GIRL

You’re harassing me.

MAN

No, I’m not.

GIRL

Yes you are.

MAN

Trust me, when I harass you. You’ll know it.

Say “So long” to Mr. Nice Guy on page 6…

 GIRL

Listen, asshole…

MAN

NO, YOU LISTEN, BITCH. IF YOU HANG UP ON ME AGAIN I’LL GUT YOU LIKE A FISH. UNDERSTAND?

Silence. Kevin Note: A Long BEAT.

GIRL

Who is this?

MAN

Who do you think it is?

Silence.

GIRL

Where are you calling from?

MAN

Where do you think I am? Kevin Note: I’m calling from?

GIRL

I’m two seconds from calling the police.

MAN

They’d never make it in time.

The following is crossed out…

GIRL

Where are you?

MAN

I think you know.

The game begins on page 7…

GIRL

Is this a (Kevin Note: some sort of) joke?

MAN

More of a game, really.

 

“The Rules” are born on page 7…

MAN

You should never say “Who’s there?” Don’t you watch scary movies? It’s a death wish.

KEVIN’S NOTES

Steven Orth is introduced on page 9. The first draft of the script features a very loose description of Steve—“He’s been roughed up, but he’s alive.”

Kevin knows this isn’t good enough and he fleshes out Steve’s physical description…

“Normally he’s a handsome guy. big and powerful but at this moment he appears very helpless… his eyes wide in fear as he stares at his girlfriend.”

FROM THE FIRST DRAFT

On page 10, next to the following exchange, is Kevin’s Note:Work on this”…

MAN

I’m going to ask you three (Kevin’s Note: a) questions. If you get them right—Steve lives.

Three curtainless [sic] windows line one wall. The girl turns out the lights, crouching down behind the couch… out of sight.

GIRL

Please don’t do this… Kevin’s Note: What kind of questions?

MAN

Come on, they’re easy. Movie trivia.

GIRL

No… please.

MAN

It’s your favorite category.

GIRL

(begging)

..please…

MAN

Who had knifes [sic] for fingers in A NIGHTMARE ON ELM…

GIRL

(instantly)

FREDDY KRUEGER!

MAN

Oooh. You’re good.

GIRL

Don’t do this. I can’t…

MAN

Next question.

GIRL

No…

MAN

Who terrorized baby sitters [sic] on HALLOWEEN? Kevin’s Note: What’s was his name?

Suddenly… through tears…Godsent…

GIRL

(a whisper)

Michael…Michael Myers.

KEVIN’S NOTES

Between pages 12 and 13 is an extra sheet of paper. On it, Kevin wrote…

1) Add Casey into script. Increase narration to add warmth.

2) Rework questions sequence

3) Find characters in Girl/Voice

4) Improve Dialogue

FROM THE ROUGH DRAFT

In response to seeing Steve’s body…

A SCREAM erupts from the girl (Kevin note: Casey) as she collapses to the floor… nearly passing out.

At this point the film was still titled “Scary Movie,” but there it is– the title we’ve all come to know and love. Mentioned for the first time on page 13.

And they say that number’s unlucky.

 

On page 14 Casey plots her next move after being asked “What door am I at?”

Silence. The girl doesn’t answer. Kevin Note: child like.

MAN

Oh no. She must be thinking she can outrun me. I go to the front door—she goes out the back. The closest neighbor is half a mile away. You really think you’re up for it?

 The following is crossed out…

GIRL

I’m not going anywhere.

MAN

Is that my cue?

MY NOTES

Unlike in the final film, Casey and the killer don’t stop their conversation once he’s in the house. Lines like “Let’s play a new game. It’s called Hide N’ Seek. You’re it,” and “Come on, shit smear. Find me,” were excised from the final draft.

FROM THE ROUGH DRAFT

Casey gets outside the house using a window instead of a door.

On page 16 Ghostface is born…

She moves further along the house…squeezing by hedges…to the next window…she peeks in to see the man…

STARING BACK AT HER…

His face covered with a ghostly white mask, inches from her…his eyes piercing through…soulless…the girl SCREAMS BLOODY MURDER.

MY NOTES

The above description of Ghostface is basically exactly as it appears in the 1997 release of the screenplay.

FROM THE ROUGH DRAFT

Even more evidence of how clear Kevin’s vision was from the very first printing…

FATHER

That fish smelled strong.

MOTHER

I told you to send it back.

That’s the exact exchange the Becker’s are having as they approach their home in the final film. It’s amazing to see something so miniscule was in Kevin’s head from the get-go.

In this early version of the script, Casey does NOT remove the mask from her killer. In later drafts, Ms. Becker’s last moment of triumph was taken from a death scene found much later in this first printing.

The FATHER character is revealed to be named Hank—which was used for Mr. Loomis in the final draft of the screenplay.

On page 19…

FATHER

Get in the car and drive (Kevin’s Note: down) to the Lindley’s.

In the final draft, as a nod to Halloween, the Becker’s neighbors last name is the Mackenzies. Lindley is a surname Kevin Williamson would go on to use for Michelle Williams’ character Jen on Dawson’s Creek.

On page 19 it’s ‘Game Over’…

EXT. FRONT DOOR

The father rushes out the door to find his wife…on her knees, bent over…wretching. [sic] His eyes move beyond to a tree in the front yard…his stomach fails him…his dinner
rises…as he bares [sic] witness to the single, most horrifying sight he’ll ever see.

That of his only daughter as she hangs from the tree…strung up…very much dead…her stomach ripped open…her soft, wet insides moving, tricking…slowly down her legs.

FADE TO BLACK

ROLL CREDITS Kevin’s Note: BEGIN MAIN CREDITS

Coming up in Part II of our series…

A major change in locale, a long lost scene with Neil Prescott and the introduction of… Gayle Storm?!?